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The Silence

The silence- deafening
Break it
-Broken

Dreams are all we have
Don't wake me- i'm afraid...

Fragile hearts
Aching souls
Moving on
Letting go

The quiet- haunting
Speak the
-Unspoken

The realization
-i'm alone
Empty castle
-No one's home
Lost my crown
-Will i find it?
Won't you tell me?
-Would you hide it?

Burdens heavy
Take this all
On my hands
And knees i crawl...

i never meant to lie to you
All the things i've put you through...

Forgotten in the silence
Clearly disowned
i guess i'm just
Meant to be alone...
©2003-2009 ~justkristy
:iconjustkristy:

Author's Comments

Yeah... i wrote this yesterday morning in class... i was on something... i write weird stuff sometimes...

Anyway, it's not done, as i type... i'll finish it as i'm typing it up...

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:iconjesusbite:
Your screenshot nailed it.
Put it back in the journal where it belongs.
Keep it there for a year.
And then come back to it and see if anything is salvagable.
:iconbloodiedmemories:
i love the format. great work

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HUNGER ARTIST- SUMMER 2005
:iconundefinability:
I don't know if this was your intention, but this is what I noticed.
I loved the rhyming with "broken" and " unspoken", I noticed that as I was reading it to myself. I read it fast-paced, and those were the only two words I read slower than others.
Just. . . brilliant.

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:iconsadnessincarnate:
oh kristy i like this. . .
:iconjustkristy:
Thanks!

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:iconjustkristy:
Yes, it was intentional. :)

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TheOneAndOnly
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:iconseekingtruth:
Emotive, to be sure.

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:iconcolourcraze:
props to you for nifty rhythm!
I like the way it flows :)

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